Me, I have created the Infantery of Void. Four Pre-teen who incarnate each a negative feeling. There Gregory a emo/goth/punk who represent rensentement and hate; Mallory an insecure Alpha Bitch with butterfly-like wing fire, who represent disdain and arrogance; Zachary, a sort of Jester/Djinn who represent mockery and the satisfastion of humiliation of other; and finally Daisy a sort of magical girl followed by Andy her pet/familiar also monotous than her. She represent apathy.
i loved the book and really like the representation you made of the caracters! their are well done, i imagined them like that so much. wish you would of made war her bullet teeth..... so cool! you should make a second when they become more themselves near the end.
One thing bothers me : I think (accordingly to the Pratchett's Myth of Death, for it is HIS Death) Death would have been better the classical Way... Death is not modern, Death is totally (and die to be anything else that) classical. Death is the good old guy that never (?) changes !
I love how you portrayed them, especially War and Pollution... When I first read the book I couldn't really picture Pollution, but seeing your interpretation of him, I think that's a really good representation of him!